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As a former English Major, I usually really enjoy the art of writing text for porn sites. Right now I'm writing descriptions for our new videos though, and I feel like I've written so many descriptions of models/videos that I'm just falling asleep as I write them and the text doesn't sound hot at all.
How do you think I can get inspired to write hot erotic text again? Maybe I just need some coffee and a few dicks slapping me in the face for support.
I just whistle for the wifey and get laid... generally that works :coffee:
Imagine a guy you had a crush on in high school or college and knew pretty well, telling you about hot sex he's been having lately, the kind of stuff that makes you think "oh fuck please don't let me get obvious wood in front of him." Young guys seem to have a way of describing sex that sounds like the best porn descriptions ever. Maybe that was just my raging hormones at the time...but that's the idea, to write something that gets guys feeling like that.
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Originally Posted by gaystoryman
Now I know where your creative bursts come from Ian !!
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Thanks SLS, great advice! :groovy:Quote:
Imagine a guy you had a crush on in high school or college and knew pretty well, telling you about hot sex he's been having lately, the kind of stuff that makes you think "oh fuck please don't let me get obvious wood in front of him." Young guys seem to have a way of describing sex that sounds like the best porn descriptions ever. Maybe that was just my raging hormones at the time...but that's the idea, to write something that gets guys feeling like that.
How's this sound?
I spotted Yoshi on a Tokyo Saturday night as he stood in front of his motorbike in a dim back alley, slowly inhaling his cigarette. I had to conceal my boner and tug it down in my pants as I spied on this cute twink boy and dreamed it was my cock his beautiful lips were sucking on. He turned around and looked at me and grabbed the huge boner sticking from his shorts. He definitely was not as shy as me...
That's hot! It gave a sexy visual image, which is what I like. I love love love writing but I suck, let me try a version of that so you can compare and contrast.
It was my third sultry saturday night in Tokyo. I was sick of sweating, and constantly readjusting my dick was keeping me semi-hard. I leaned against a wall for a quick break, glancing around at the thinning pedestrians and unfamiliar sites. That's when I spotted Kiyoshi, a perfect vision of Asian sensuality and masculinity. He stood in front of his motorbike, casually puffing on a cigarette. I couldn't take my eyes off of him, every inch and angle of his body was like a visual drug. He kept looking up at a window and checking his watch. I let out a sigh, wetting my lips, and noticing that this time I hadn't stopped adjusting my dick. It was now rock hard, and I started imagining my dick in the place of that cigarette, those eyes looking up at me instead of the window. I knew if I could ever get that chance, the last thing he would do is check his watch. Suddenly his eyes turned down and fixed on mine; It felt like every spare ounce of blood instantly rushed to my face. A sly grin graced his beautiful pouty lips, while his hand moved down to his crotch. Was he mocking me? I pushed off of the wall, ready to walk away. Before I could take a step, his cock became obviously hard, poking out of the top of his shorts. He was enviously secure with himself, and definately not shy like me...
I'm all trite descriptive words and over the top-ness. You are straight to the point, subtly descriptive and fast paced. Which is better with adult story writing?
SLS...That's brilliant and hot!!! You have definitely taken my text to a new (and improved) level. ;)Quote:
It was my third sultry saturday night in Tokyo. I was sick of sweating, and constantly readjusting my dick was keeping me semi-hard. I leaned against a wall for a quick break, glancing around at the thinning pedestrians and unfamiliar sites. That's when I spotted Kiyoshi, a perfect vision of Asian sensuality and masculinity. He stood in front of his motorbike, casually puffing on a cigarette. I couldn't take my eyes off of him, every inch and angle of his body was like a visual drug. He kept looking up at a window and checking his watch. I let out a sigh, wetting my lips, and noticing that this time I hadn't stopped adjusting my dick. It was now rock hard, and I started imagining my dick in the place of that cigarette, those eyes looking up at me instead of the window. I knew if I could ever get that chance, the last thing he would do is check his watch. Suddenly his eyes turned down and fixed on mine; It felt like every spare ounce of blood instantly rushed to my face. A sly grin graced his beautiful pouty lips, while his hand moved down to his crotch. Was he mocking me? I pushed off of the wall, ready to walk away. Before I could take a step, his cock became obviously hard, poking out of the top of his shorts. He was enviously secure with himself, and definately not shy like me...
I think writing short and to the point is good in site tours. If the language is too complex, long or convoluted I think the surfers won't read it...they are horny and want to get off ASAP! I also tend to write in more simple language on my sites, because a lot of our surfers are Asian or non-native English speakers.
However, if it's for a gay story site or gay erotic novel I think your approach is far better and would definitely draw me in! I'm hungry for your Chapter 2 heheheh...
I know what your story was for, but it is very erotic story-like, a brilliant step ahead of the usual tour text. It not only made me want to see Asian men, it made me want to write about them instantly lol. So yeah, you are doing great imo.
This is a tough one. Some days, I'm just not in the mood, can't find the groove. And during those times, I find it's best just to not push it.
Saturday is my big gallery day, and I usually find spending a few minutes browsing through Ounique or Gay Adult Photos gets the juices flowing. Sometimes I find a hot new picture set and that usually inspires me.
Michael
I actually go read erotica to help me get fresh ideas on writing text for galleries and tour designs.
take some time off, go relax and get your mind off it. In a day or two you will be thinking smutty again ;)
That's the thing though - we never seem to find a day or two AWAY from this stuff!Quote:
Originally Posted by Chilihost