Pierre Fitch new design

Hi

Guys i would like some feedback on my new tour page 1
i should have more soon like a splash page and tour page 2 and join page and members template

but tell me what you think of this design
http://www.tenderdesign.com/clients/pierrefitchonline/

overall i like the look and colors although i don't care for the pic at the bottom. is the text near the top going to be actual text so you can change it whenever you want?

btw, you might want to have your designer change resilition to resolution ;)

yeah i did not like the pic at the bottom my self

i need to find a good one

and for the text my bio i don't know what to put i added that for now but i think we can change to something else yea
that we can change too resilition to resolution

basschick xerex is online now working on my design

Much better than the look you currently have. I agree with Patti, I don't like that bottom image of you either.

Speaking of the images, are they the only ones you have of yourself?

Ive seen them quite a lot over the past few weeks so im sure if you have been TGPing the surfers have also.

You might want to consider doing a shoot against a white background with some different colored clothes on as well as some different poses, just to mix the content up a little.

My thoughts for saying this are that if a surfer has already seen the pics of you being used on the tour, chances are, they will think they are the only images that will be inside the site.

By doing a couple of shoots wearing different clothes and in different poses, you can use those images on your site tour and surfer wont have already seen them which, imho, will translate in to better sales for you :)

Regards,

Lee

Hi

Lee that is what i did i took all new pics in diffrent clothes in a white background the pic you see on the design is new no one has never seen those pics before on the net i just took them 3 days ago .. i don't know were you seen a pic like that before...

Well, the clothes are different but the colours and poses all look the same, which may be why Lee thought he already saw them. (Actually I thought the same thing too.) Exploring new colours/poses/environments/objects might help with the perception of the "uniqueness" of your content.

much nicer, I like it a lot!

cheers,
Luke

I like it a lot Pierre, but the first thing I noticed was that the 4 pictures on the top have the same quality that a screenshot would have and they stand out too much. I would lower the transparency of those images and maybe apply a slight blur to give the page more depth (and to lose the screenshot look)...right now those images are competing with the main picture and confusing the viewer.

they don't seem to compete to me - just my opinion.

when pierre plugs in the thumbs on the page, there's be a lot more color, too.