New FHG

I jjust put up a new FHG at http://dirtytony.com/FHG/BL6352/index.php.

Some people had problems with the video loading on the last one. I'd appreciate any critiques or suggestions!

Thanks

TS

Oh, ya, and the dude is smokin'! IMHO

Works for me kind of ho hum, but it works

any suggestions?

nice design... still doens't work on my mac but it's cool. nice looking gallery.

The text needs work.. I'd start out making it about him and not about other people and you... that last sentence you have would be a better opening sentence.

You almost toss off that he's shipping out to the Persian Gulf when that should be your big selling point.

The "FIND OUT MORE" link is way too subtle...try making it larger and in a color that contrasts more with the background (black on dark blue is barely noticeable).

I'd also add a blatant link to your site, something like "Find more horny studs like Mason at Dirty Tony".

Also, it would be nice to put more key words in the text about Mason so you'll get a few more SE hits. Instead of just "I've gotten so much great positive feedback on Mason that I decided to call him up and see what he was up to.", explain the positive feedback was, "So many guys said they drooled over Mason's bubble butt and his long cum shots that ..."

One other thing, the video clip would not work for me in Firefox 2.0.0.3 (running Windows XP SP2) but it did work in IE7.

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Originally Posted by Fister

The "FIND OUT MORE" link is way too subtle...try making it larger and in a color that contrasts more with the background (black on dark blue is barely noticeable).

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I had to search for that link. I didn't see it for the longest time. Btw, that is a grey link on purple... not black on blue. ;)

doesn't work on my mac either....