Okay EBook Site Body Text Suggestions...

Could some of you folks take a look at the body text that im using for some of my ebook membership sites and let me know if it 'sounds' ok please?

I tried to make them all look similar in layout and use some marketing text thats going to drive sales to the sites via the search engines (which so far seems to be working) but i want to make sure that the text 'reads' okay when it comes to what the individual ebooks will be selling.

Here are the current ebooks i have the layouts for that are online and pulling traffis for, ill be working on the members areas of them later this week and hopefully setting the join links live on them over the weekend.

http://www.craigslistrevenue.com
http://www.advancedslimming.com
http://www.buildbodymass.com
http://www.undercoverskincare.com
http://www.penisadvance.com
http://www.orgasmpleasures.com

Any suggestions on how any of the text can be improved upon would be greatly appreciated, especially on the body mass and weight loss ones.

The penis enlargement one im actually pretty happy with as its already starting to make regular sales each week.

Regards,

Lee