Bad promo writing

Dear Affiliate Program Webmasters,

Any use of more than one exclamation point in the description of a scene constitutes bad writing. It is rare you should use one at all.

Love,

Your Affiliates :wub:

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Seriously, take a peek at Jakob Nielsen's excellent essay on writing for the web.

http://www.nngroup.com/articles/how-...ad-on-the-web/

I am convinced that webmasters who switch from !-filled marketing-speak to at least minimally decent writing (or better yet, what Nielsen suggests) will experience a nice boost in traffic from affiliates using said promo content.

O M G !

My pet peeve! I just bought a book that I was waiting for! Sigh! It's almost unreadable! Seriously! This author loves those damn things!

I exaggerated a bit, but that book is loaded with the damn things. I don't understand "writers" love affair with those...

Lloyd

if more than one "!" is bad writing then I must be completely evil! - LOL

I'll try to restrain from using those but it will limit Me here.

- jim

Dear Affiliate Program Webmasters,

The correct use of an exclamation point does not excuse poor writing in the previous sentence.

Love,

Your Affiliates :tongue:



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