Marketing a new site

I received the following email from someone I hired from this site to do marketing for our site:

Men of Sex4HotMen.com :

Buy Adult GAY Items at DEEP Discounted Prices !

We would like to introduce you guys to the first Gay Male ONLY auction site. It's called www.HotPopPorn , the premier gay adult auction site!

Registration is absolutely FREE!

Weather your looking for an adult item to buy at a great price, or you're looking to auction items we got the site for YOU !

* Clothing
* Magazines
* DVD's/Videos
* Toys
* Books
* Personal Services

And More!

Check us out, support this one of a kind site.

www.HotPopPorn.com


The direction I gave him was to prepare a press release I could use to send out to the membership of sex site to promote our site.

I wasn't going to doing anything but rewrite it, but after talking to another member, it was suggested that I post it here and ask for comments. Would the above email make you want to type in my URL and check out the site?

I think it could be suped up a little.

Its late right now but ill do a quick re-write later when i awake for ya Tony, the basics are there but it doesnt 'grab' me so to speak.

Regards,

Lee

hmm, well to be honest.. no..

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Buy Adult GAY Items at DEEP Discounted Prices !

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I'd use

GAY ADULT ITEMS AT GREAT BARGAIN PRICES

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We would like to introduce you guys to the first Gay Male ONLY auction site. It's called www.HotPopPorn , the premier gay adult auction site!

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I'd go with..

INTRODUCING THE 1st GAY MALE AUCTION SITE > HOTPOPPORN

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Weather your looking for an adult item to buy at a great price, or you're looking to auction items we got the site for YOU !

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HOTPOPPORN FOR ALL YOUR GAY ADULT ITEMS
GREAT PRICES
FREE REGISTRATION
IT IS ALL HERE AT HOTPOPPORN.COM


(side note, it is wether not weather)

Not sure if i'd list the items but if i did i'd probably run them in a line across or be more descriptive

Books > Gay Erotica & Other Reading Material

something like that.. least in my opinion for what its worth.

Ian

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to the first Gay Male ONLY auction site

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While I understood what you were trying to say here, that the site auctions Gay Men's items, the ONLY kinda gave me the impression that if I'm not a gay male ... go away.

Since an auction site has to attract as many buyers as possible I'd say putting the emphasis on getting bargains on adult gay merchandise is a good thing, but there is no need to "yell" it with caps and exclamation marks. Your guy sounds like he's more used to writing scripts for local used car dealerships. Keep all the facts and write your own sales pitch.

I am grateful to all of you who provided your feedback. And, I agree with you. I guess, what I thought was implied in my post, but not explicit, is that the copy you read cost me about $400.

When I read it, I thought I could have done better myself. And, as an accountant, I am not the most creative-type walking around. But, knowing that I can be too critical, I thought I'd "sleep on it." When I showed the copy to a GWW member, whose opinion I am beginning to have faith in, she couldn't believe it. That's when I posted it here. And, I think you confirmed my feelings that this was worth $400 about as much as a mailing list from the RNC for my site.

Thanks again for your feedback,

Tony

Thats awful! I know your site, and I'm always bored; hit me up on ICQ anytime you need something like this typed up and I'd be happy to do it for free!

If you really need to hire help, a good rule of thumb is to never pay more than $50 a DAY for it. Figure up how many days it would take you to do, then take it times $50 and never pay more. So this job, if done extremely well, shouldn't have even cost you that much.

I've never had a hard manual labor job that payed much more than $50 a day, much less helping someone out with sales text, promotion, etc.

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Originally posted by DigitalJay
Thats awful! I know your site, and I'm always bored; hit me up on ICQ anytime you need something like this typed up and I'd be happy to do it for free!

If you really need to hire help, a good rule of thumb is to never pay more than $50 a DAY for it. Figure up how many days it would take you to do, then take it times $50 and never pay more. So this job, if done extremely well, shouldn't have even cost you that much.

I've never had a hard manual labor job that payed much more than $50 a day, much less helping someone out with sales text, promotion, etc.

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$50 a day :wtf:

As a programmer I made about that an hour. In web/graphic design the rates are fairly high, but that's normal. I have no idea what copywriting goes for these days.

Yeah well I'm poor and I always have been. I'd feel rich if I was making $10 or more a day online. Right now I make about that every few weeks.

As far as the price of hiring someone to do work like that; I can't imagine paying anyone too much unless their work is excellent. Otherwise it's too easy to do it yourself to be worth the money or the time spent finding someone who does quality work.

ok, so here is what they started with right?

Men of Sex4HotMen.com :

Buy Adult GAY Items at DEEP Discounted Prices !

We would like to introduce you guys to the first Gay Male ONLY auction site. It's called www.HotPopPorn , the premier gay adult auction site!

Registration is absolutely FREE!

Weather your looking for an adult item to buy at a great price, or you're looking to auction items we got the site for YOU !

* Clothing
* Magazines
* DVD's/Videos
* Toys
* Books
* Personal Services

And More!

Check us out, support this one of a kind site.

www.HotPopPorn.com



now with a few changes :)

Men of Sex4HotMen.com :

Buy adult MALE oriented items at your winning bid price !

We would like to introduce you guys to the first Adult Male oriented auction site. It's called www.HotPopPorn , the sexiest items for guys!

Registration is absolutely FREE!

Do you have smoking hot items to sell? Or would you like to find that something special to really heat up those cold winter nights?

* Clothing (One look at these auctions will pop your tent!)

* Magazines
* DVD's/Videos
* Toys
* Books
* Personal Services (VERY HOT!)

And More!

Come on over! We are sure to rock your night-life.

www.HotPopPorn.com

someone should list some raver oriented items, light sticks etc....

that will draw in the club boiz :)

hmm, gay raver kit, that could be interesting. some light sticks, glow in the dark condoms, some flavored lubricants etc... in a small case! maybe some body paints. wow, that could be really hot!

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Originally posted by eclipse
someone should list some raver oriented items, light sticks etc....

that will draw in the club boiz :)

hmm, gay raver kit, that could be interesting. some light sticks, glow in the dark condoms, some flavored lubricants etc... in a small case! maybe some body paints. wow, that could be really hot!

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Okay, Eclipse, put your "money where your mouth is," so to speak. List those raver items.

And, thanks for the rewrite. It's a hellava lot better than the paid copy.

Tony

I like the design of your site a lot. I think you should put the banner at the bottom inside your tables above the links at the very bottom though. The welcome new users and members graphics aren't great either. Other than that I think the site is perfect and a great idea. Everyone knows about...that one big adult auction site, I bet it's just a short matter of time before everyone knows hotpopporn.

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Originally posted by eclipse
someone should list some raver oriented items, light sticks etc....

that will draw in the club boiz :)

hmm, gay raver kit, that could be interesting. some light sticks, glow in the dark condoms, some flavored lubricants etc... in a small case! maybe some body paints. wow, that could be really hot!

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I'll post some stuff from my cam shows once I get my site up. I love glowsticks! Recommend some stuff to use in shows that I could put up for auction on HotPopPorn afteward.

Jay,

If a cute, young guy has had it on his body, there's someone that will want to buy. Underwear, socks, toys, you name it. Glowsticks, depending on where it's been. The deeper the more valuable :)

Tony