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Its only 7PM man, and really I am taking a few years to get some work done, then I will start going out every week-end. BTW if you think having 2 grocery stores on the same street a big + then you really do need to get out more, I am just saying. :PQuote:
Originally Posted by curiousbunny
LOL its just the way you say things!!!
we will send you a hot blonde twink 2 pound ur butt see if you
change a bit ::wink::
It says hookup for the reasons listed already but also because of the colour red. Red is very sexual and dangerous so you may want to go with a different colour scheme.Quote:
Originally Posted by curiousbunny
The models need to be a little older looking and looking like they're getting together for coffee or doing couple type things instead of getting ready to fuck or go to a club.
Oh yes -- And state it -- there's no written indication on that page saying that this is the place to find a partner. (As opposed to finding a hookup.)
A catchy headline or tagline would help out and perhaps a bit of txt in that regard. I know it says "find a date, friend or more" but that's too vague.
Just a couple of quick thoughts.
The slogan on the T-Shirt on the left distracts away from the lip-lock (it shifts the readers eyes from the faces to the one shirt)... plus it is only half viewable, therefore the reader gets stuck in a tunnel confused because half of the slogan is lost.
The Tatt is OK for guys who like guys with Tatts, and a turn-off for guys who DON'T like Tatts on other guys.
is This Any Better?
shouldn't you have 2 guys looking at one another - not sappily. they could be loosely holding hands or perhaps could have an arm around each other. or at least let the kiss be less intense and show more of their faces.
just a thought but i think deep kissing often says sex to people more than love.
The new one is actually a sweet picture. But then I am a sappy guy. :) It says "love" to me.
Ah yes, now that new picture makes a big difference. :groovy:
Yes... much better! Love it.
New cover is much better...always a good idea to have the models looking at the camera (as if to invite the viewer into the picture)