this page is short
http://www.nakedfrathouse.com/html2/tourV2/index.html
which never sells for me.
it also has only one graphic that offers us the guys - an animated graphic. since you're selling a visual product, you need to start off with some visual stuff imo - you say the content is great, but nothing about that first page shows me that. you'll lose a lot of surfers since you aren't showing the good stuff - even if they continue on through the tour, their enthusiasm would be blunted.
