Originally Posted by
basschick
first off, in 1024 part of each blog title is cut off.
second, you have the "Hello world! Welcome to WordPress. " wordpress default blog in the middle of your page.
third, you have no breathing room above or below your text, and you don't have the title of the site linked within each post.
fourth, you're not using collages with a good amount of text under the collage - you're using pics. use 3 to 12 pics per collage, show some action. give the surfers a taste of what your sponsors have to offer.
fifth, you're not showing dick. why would a horny man want to come back to a site that doesn't show cock? and what would trigger him to click?
you have a non niche blog, but you're trading with 3 arab/turkish blogs and a bear blog. since you have no arabic/turkish or hairy men on your page, this traffic isn't going to love what you offer. jasun's a great guy, but his blog doesn't seem like it would send you useful traffic, either.