I made this to enter a contest, will any of you give me some constructive criticism?
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I made this to enter a contest, will any of you give me some constructive criticism?
The picture and logo are cool...just a lil hard to read "Beach"
Other than that...I like it
I'm not the designer in the family though :goof:
I'd pump up the brightness and contrast to make those colours really scream out. You've got these great blues and pinks in there, and the white shorts.. so making it just a bit more extreme will get a bit more attention and probably more clicks.
Looks good, though.
Thanks Rainbo. I agree. I'm not really good at making text readable, it always looks kind of fuzzy and stuck together.
Or make it a little bolder and add a stroke around the pink to make it accented more on the blue and white of the background image :)
Regards,
Lee
I agree Jasun! It didn't look bland to me b/c of the pinks and blues lol until I saw your reply, I just tried it and it definately does have more "kick" now.
After everyone posts, i'll post the reworked version I make with your advice and see what you all think!
*stares blankly at wet Australian ass*
... sorry... what was the thread about again?
That's a good idea!Quote:
Originally posted by Lee
Or make it a little bolder and add a stroke around the pink to make it accented more on the blue and white of the background image :)
Regards,
Lee
And add some animation to it. Nothing on that banner makes me to click on it and that is purpose of banners isn't it? Just a little animation to get surfers atention will be cool.
unsual banner size.. should get lots of attention :blush:
Hahaha...took the thoughts right outta my headQuote:
Originally posted by BDBionic
*stares blankly at wet Australian ass*
... sorry... what was the thread about again?
I have no idea if this is even a design possibility
I'm not design inclined... butt... to add some movement
to it as previously suggested - I wonder if it would be
possible to make the waves roll in (move)...
or maybe a bit of water of sweat dripping down his
body (animated)
I want to see the re-work you already did...
can you tell I am impatient ?? LOL
~Bell
Excellent idea but 400x200 banners generally aren't animated, eats up too much bandwidth. Otherwise i would.Quote:
Originally posted by iggysick
And add some animation to it. Nothing on that banner makes me to click on it and that is purpose of banners isn't it? Just a little animation to get surfers atention will be cool.
Bell: I LOVE that idea, but things like that can't really be done without flash or the file size would be huge. I'm not ready to do flash banners yet lol I can't afford flash right now.
I'd put a stroke around the whole banner. You never know what colour background these thing will end up on and a one-pixel stroke will help contain the whole thing and prevent it from getting lost.
Cheers
Dzinerbear
So animate just "click here" ;)Quote:
Originally posted by DigitalJay
Excellent idea but 400x200 banners generally aren't animated, eats up too much bandwidth. Otherwise i would.
when you say put a "stroke" around the outside
is that the same thing as a thin border or frame ??
~Bell
Yup, you can put storkes around fonts anywhere from 1px on upQuote:
Originally posted by Bell
when you say put a "stroke" around the outside
is that the same thing as a thin border or frame ??
~Bell
Yea, it's basically a one pixel wide "border" of another contrasting color ... you can also draw a table over the image that has a clear center with a border color that sits slightly inside the overall picture area - either a rectangle, or a rounded corner rectangle. Easy to do in a program like Fireworks.Quote:
Originally posted by Bell
when you say put a "stroke" around the outside
is that the same thing as a thin border or frame ??
~Bell
Or, just go into your typing layer, double click, then click on styles and play with the text effects.
Do you find that a little flashing "Click Here" really works?
i've never really checked into it, but I'm not sure that would make much of a difference.
If you're gonna do the animation thing, would it not make sense to do something really dramatic and eye catching?
Some people are kinda slow :wacko: , or maybe just new :baby: to the net.
I find that putting a small ani, or somthing that's flashing does help...then they know where or what to click on.
Somtimes just say CLICK HERE works fine too...though I think that even that can be missed.
Doesn't hurt to have some things move (too much is not good though)...just a guide to the new surfers.
I had read some articles about making banners I remember that surfers do click more on banners that calling on some action (in this case action is click)
I never knew it was that easy to put a stroke (of any shade)
around text...
is that around ANY font ??
or just the standard ones ??
are the fonts already IN the graphics program ??
or are those things a designer would have elsewhere and
pull into the design ??
are you able to import whatever font you want into your
graphics program and get it to work - for example
in putting a stroke around a new font that you find that you like ??
is there a limit to how many fonts a graphics program
can hold on the ready ??
~Bell
excellent! adding a 1px frame and a click here now!
That is any font, and it's really as easy as 1 or 2 clicks (if you pick a color too), and if you are using windows you can access any font in your font list, complete with a sample next to it incase you cant remember exactly what it looks like. Some good progs even show you how it will look instantly, before you "apply" it.Quote:
Originally posted by Bell
I never knew it was that easy to put a stroke (of any shade)
around text...
is that around ANY font ??
or just the standard ones ??
are the fonts already IN the graphics program ??
or are those things a designer would have elsewhere and
pull into the design ??
are you able to import whatever font you want into your
graphics program and get it to work - for example
in putting a stroke around a new font that you find that you like ??
is there a limit to how many fonts a graphics program
can hold on the ready ??
~Bell
Ummm, lemme see...Quote:
Originally posted by Bell
I never knew it was that easy to put a stroke (of any shade)
around text...
is that around ANY font ??
or just the standard ones ??
are the fonts already IN the graphics program ??
or are those things a designer would have elsewhere and
pull into the design ??
are you able to import whatever font you want into your
graphics program and get it to work - for example
in putting a stroke around a new font that you find that you like ??
is there a limit to how many fonts a graphics program
can hold on the ready ??
~Bell
Yes, any font
You can add as many fonts as you like (we're talking photoshope right)
I have 100's of fonts and just add what I like when I find a new one.
All I do is double click on the text layer, then either just do the stroke command, or go use the "styles" and play.
Good programs do utilize every font you put in your font folder- the thing to watch though is getting crazy about loading up that folder with literally hundreds of fonts, as those all have to preload when you boot up your system ... talk about megga lagtime til you see your desktop! LOL
Ok here is what I did so far. I accidently saved it as .gif the first time so I can't edit individual things like the fonts without starting over *hmph* but I think this is a little better:
OK, i'm going to start from scratch and try a whole new one. Thank you SO much you all, this is truely a new age in friendly webmasters! I'm so glad this is nothing like the days when I only posted on an AVS board and the competition was fierce and mean. Everyone was always witch hunting to eliminate competition. Working together means more quality, and a new standard in the industry *warm glow* lol :P
Yeah i agree... the "beach Booty" has to go so it can be read better. Plus not sure about the pink.
As for the pictures... play with the contrast to make it more bright and wet and sexy.
Other than that, good job ;)