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    Please review my site.

    Hey check out my site. I'm open to criticism :francais:

    http://www.sextion1.com


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    LOVE 4 SALE OR LEASE SEX MONTHLY! :) longboardjim's Avatar
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    i actually like the models! , but then i like real! , the "loading!" is slow but it could be at my end ( rainy day ) , the "write-up's" are catchy! and the overall design is simplistic! , i was especially intrigued to join to find out what a real street hustler has to say ( wish i had thought of that angle! ) being myself a virgin! :goof:

    sincerely ~ ..."it's like the first time! , everytime!"...


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    I'ma big fan of amateur model sites and I think you've got some cool content. The tour really sold me and you're in your face with the join links, which is good.

    Couple thoughts:

    I'm gonna convert to CSS soon (really!) but meantime I love nesting tables. You may want to try putting tables in your date cells to give you more control and space around elements

    The page loads super slow for me. I think you can optimize those images in your graphics program or with a stand-alone app.

    You have outbound links on your preview pages. Unless they're paying you big time, I'd take them off and put them inside or at least have them open in new windows.

    I'm a text fan so a paragraph that explains what the site is about would be great...and a good opportunity to use keywords for SEO.

    I'm also not sure how much content is inside. If you have lots and have done this for a while, tell your visitors.

    Oh and if you have any redhead models you wanna send my way, that would be just fine. :pie:


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    I like the overall design. It is simplistic, but effective. If you're in the United States, the way you've phrased your link to your 2257 page is incorrect unless you aren't worried about being compliant.

    Also, you show a couple banners out to other sites on the bottom of several tour pages - major traffic leak. If you absolutely want to submit the site and need to show recip banners - do a small links link at bottom of the index page ONLY and make a links page for them. Right now they have the option of hitting your join link or going off to look at more free porn ... not cool. If you must show a recip on index - only show it on the index - and wayyyyyyyyyyyyy down your page.


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    Hi and welcome to the board...
    Sorry but i'm not gonna lie to you... there is pratically nothing i like about that site. maybe a better design and not so "gallery" looking.

    The models are actually doing nothing to me at all.

    Sorry dude, i'm no help at all
    But still, welcome to the board


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    I like the simplicity of it... the guys are real and hot.. and yeah, the writeups are great.

    You're going for an "Amateur" look, so you've nailed it. :thumbsup:
    Jasun Mark. Crass of the Titans.


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    simple design....


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    chick with a bass basschick's Avatar
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    i'd like it better if the pics had either borders or were set in tables with white backgrounds. i don't care for your thumb layout - i like thumbs laid out so they have a feel of more structure, and that sells best for me.

    i'd also make it wider on the page - remember, a lot of people are on 1024 now.


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    I think simple layouts are always good (I have a tendancy to get complicated with mine at times and have to always remind myself to keep it simple)... Since you only have so much to keep a surfer's interest, it makes sense that layouts be simple. So, I think you're good there...

    Regarding your models, I have to be honest, there's only one that caught my eye on the previews and that is Mikah! He's hot! But then, I have no idea how you plan on marketing it (you do say, "something for everyone"...) Personally, in order to join a site, there's gotta be tons of hot guys on it so in this case, I'd need to see a lot more Mikahs!

    I think your site is looking a little narrow because of the brown border... That's pretty much wasted space so you might as well fill it up a little more. At least then, the content area won't come off as being so narrow.

    Best of luck with your site,

    BrianDN


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