Like My New Flash Intro (no sound yet)

[MidwestMale]

http://www.eruption-films.com/finalclip.swf

[BritishTwinks]

It looks nice but I think the snippets of text appear and disappear too fast. I don't think I'm an especially slow reader, and I didn't get more than half way through any of them. Otherwise, I like it.

[MidwestMale]

Thank you should i design a sales page for website content like this one but it will be diffrent photo layout format?

http://www.midwestmale.com/modelcontents.asp