Trying some webdesign - Warning this is aimed at the hetro pervs

[Hamilton Steele]

I'm just looking for a comment on how I did.

I know I'm pretty amateur but I'm trying.

http://www.kokoom.com/steelever/pnty001/panty.htm

Thanks
Hamilton

[Lee]

Its a bit err... Basic looking.

You might want to speak to one of the designers we have on GWW and see if they would be able to knock you up a HTML template.

That way, you'll have something to build upon for future sites.

Take a look at what some other people are doing for the niche / product you are trying to sell on that page and see how you can improve upon things

To me, this looks like more of a doorway page rather than a site per se, that being said, if it makes money, who cares what it looks like

Regards,

Lee

[basschick]

i would make it all a bit smaller - writing and pics. it might work that way - sometimes stuff that looks like a "real amateur" made it sells like crazy.

[longboardjim]

i actually like it! , granted it's not "flash" or "cookie-cutter designed" as most , i felt it was more "personalized" by the model through descriptive text and provocative photo's in a story layout and not some designer "hard-selling" the model.
i am not sure that selling "used" underwear is legal in the U.S but i could be wrong ( sorry i just don't know and/or have an interest in used underwear )
an aquaintance of mine tried "auctioning" off the "undergarments" of his male models but did not do well. ( maybe it's different for females? )
good luck on the site!

sincerely ~ ..."boxers or briefs?"... :goof:

[basschick]

selling worn underwear in the u.s. - and canada, i've been told - is not legal unless you first launder the garments. it's legally the same as mailing any body fluid. still, a lot of people do it... and hamilton isn't in the u.s.

wonder what customs makes of things like this...

[Bec]

wonder what customs makes of things like this...

Dunno, but I sure wouldn't want to go into a room they're using as an impound area for them!