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    nomad0023
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    Writing Descriptions

    God this week I have to write about 1 or 2 paragraphs for all 100+ of my Feed and in-house sites I really hate writing, its one of my weakest points. Anyone have any ideas how I can do this with out all of them sounding the same. I have contacted my feed companies but to tell truth I am not sure they would even have descriptions longer that just one sentence. Can I get in trouble for altering other people adult web sites text to fit my site? :nowords:


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    Quote Originally Posted by nomad0023
    God this week I have to write about 1 or 2 paragraphs for all 100+ of my Feed and in-house sites I really hate writing, its one of my weakest points. Anyone have any ideas how I can do this with out all of them sounding the same. I have contacted my feed companies but to tell truth I am not sure they would even have descriptions longer that just one sentence. Can I get in trouble for altering other people adult web sites text to fit my site? :nowords:
    ask yourself what you would do if you went to someone elses site and found all your text on it? would you be pissed?
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    nomad0023
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    Quote Originally Posted by gaystoryman
    ask yourself what you would do if you went to someone elses site and found all your text on it? would you be pissed?
    Well ya I understand that but, I have a 100 of them to do really would not take all of any one sites text. Would have to change some text, create some myself, but ya might get some good adjectives ECT from a few sites I guess. The whole thing is going to be one big jigsaw puzzle mess. As I am getting feed back from my feed companies they cant or have not even created a paragraph description for there own stuff. But let me get one thing clear I would never just copy some ones text and rip off their site, I will just need some help is all


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    nomad0023
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    My English teacher would be loving this! :dunce:


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    and this is why bec and i and other professional writers make the big bucks ;-)

    why not find a gay glossary for some word ideas?


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    nomad0023
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    Quote Originally Posted by basschick
    and this is why bec and i and other professional writers make the big bucks ;-)

    why not find a gay glossary for some word ideas?

    A gay glossary is a good idea, I did not know they had something like that, I will look-in to that too. Ya witting is a bitch I really hate doing it, I would even rather wash dishes. I had a very large affiliate offer to run my banners on his site but suggested I write a new description for ever one of my selections. So now for the next week or so that will be all I will be doing. :shifty:


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    desslock
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    Spend some time working on your own copy. If it takes a long time, that's just what it takes. I see sites... as well as actual DVD movies whose written descriptions are plain embarassing.

    Do this: write your descriptions of these feeds in small groups at a time. Then the next day, go back and review them. By this I mean after this 24-hour cooling off period, sit there and speak what you wrote out loud... so you hear yourself saying it. Listen to how it sounds. This way you will hear awkward phrases, and you will think of improvements.

    Another benefit to this: If YOU write, than YOU own it.

    Steve


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    nomad0023
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    Ya I think making written descriptions is one of the hardest things to do, I have seen allot of really bad text in some really big sites. Its a fine line between erotic and cheesy. I am sure I will write most of it, its just that I have to do 100 of them. Like I have to write descriptions for 4 for transsexual sites, I don’t know what people that like that want to hear or expect. Its easy to do the graphic and all but when it comes to writing about it I am lost. I will do my best to write it all but think I should at lease see what other people are saying to look for trends ECT.


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    nomad0023
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    I just really wish my feed companies that I pay so much every month would help me out with this. :shifty:


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    desslock
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    Quote Originally Posted by nomad0023
    Like I have to write descriptions for 4 for transsexual sites, I don’t know what people that like that want to hear or expect. Its easy to do the graphic and all but when it comes to writing about it I am lost. I will do my best to write it all but think I should at lease see what other people are saying to look for trends ECT.
    OK ... this may sound really weird, but you know what I would do: I would go either make friends with some trannys, or talk to people who like to watch tranny porn. Just go to your local gay bar on the night when thay are having a drag show. (here at least, that is also one of the "dead nights" so striking up conversations is relatively easy)

    I do these kinds of solicitations constantly with my site. I ask my friends all the time what porn they are renting, and what they like about the DVDs of mine that they are persistently borrowing. Just with twink movies, I get so many - I love hearing from a third party a spontaneous soundbite of why it was worth the viewing.

    One friend of mine always borrows the DVDs of "Straight Porn Stars Doing Gay Solos" .... and his feedback is just wonderful. I've learned all about Mario Rossi and Pascal St James.... all to the benefit of my readers.

    Steve


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    nomad0023
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    Well man I dont think I will have to much time for clubbing This is my list of sites I have to write about a 5 or 6 full sentence description for, some as you can see have about 1 sentence from the feed company. But not really sure I could use that many of them. To tell the truth I do not have any adult movies in my place or anything. This is really just work for me, Hell I like horror movies, south park, football, fishing, ECT. I really dont think I could ever be a writer like you man, its just really not my thing, I really do wish I was better at it. OMG this is going to take forever :notsure:


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    I just got another e-mail back from a feed company they are laughing at me. Is it so weird to ask for a description, they make it sound like no one has ever asked before. :juggle:


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    I feel for ya man. This is a rought spot for me. I'm str8 but to try and capture what a gay man would say or want to hear is a challenge. I do have some gay friends so maybe I could try to bring them in on the process. Writing has never been a strong point for me to begin with. Sometimes I think it would be easier to just buy the damn descriptions!:dunce:


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    Not trying to take this off topic, but what company has that Hung on the Range feed?


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    Wow, thats a lot of descrips to write. :eek:


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