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    First, Second Or Third?

    When you write your sales text for your sites, blog posts, galleries, etc, do you find writing to the surfer in the first, second or third person perspective actually works better for sale?

    For example which of these types of writing do you prefer to use?

    I fucked his tight hole
    You fuck his tight hole
    He fucked his tight hole

    Do you think it even makes a difference if the models and remainder of the text is 'sexy'?

    Your thoughts please?

    Regards,

    Lee


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    I generally write in whatever tense is logically correct. Most of the time that's third person, except when I was writing about my old video and photo scenes. In that case I considered how the content would be displayed. On my own website it was fine to say "I", but for a description that would run on a third party website it made more sense to use the third person.

    Not sure why anyone would ever write in the second person for this sort of thing except perhaps on a voyeur site.
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    LOVE 4 SALE OR LEASE SEX MONTHLY! :) longboardjim's Avatar
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    1 & 2nd ( interpreted: my photo/video is close so should the text! )

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    I almost always use 3rd, as I don't like to talk about myself :luke:
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    We have never experimented with what converts better (good idea) but we tend to use third person.
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    Mostly third, sometimes second.
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