Need some Feedback Please...

[vdc-loki]

As I mentioned in my last thread I'm adding a 3D Toon Gay site to my program, I've just finished my 'first' draft of the tour and I'd LOVE some feedback on it.

here is a small version of the first page:


See the full size version HERE

Thanks in advance

-Loki-

[HunkyLuke]

oh nice, I like the jeans look. I think the only thing it could use is bigger "fantasy" sized cocks and some sex scenes.

[Bec]

I agree on what Luke had to say about bigger cock and some actual gay sex imagery. The other thought I had was up at the top say something more along the lines of We Have Them All ... From Sissy Boys to Daddy Bears... You'll Find Them Here & Everything In Between!

[vdc-loki]

Thanks Luke and Bec, just looking for feedback on the overall design

the 2nd page of the tour is LOADED with 'action shots' there was not much room on that first page for more then the 2 action shots, (but there will be a decent length movie on that monitor)

As for "larger 'fantasy' cocks" I don't have anything like that, I focus more on 'realistic' then fantasy when I do normal males and females and truth be told I have a 'hard' enough posing the normal penis for these guys .

I got enough positive feedback between you two and some other ppl I showed the page to, I finished up the tour, members area and made a few FHG templates using the jeans and belts theme.

IF I can stay awake the site should be submitted to CCBILL by 2morrow night, and should go into beta in a week or so, hopefully LIVE right after new years (depending on Visa's approval time)

-Loki-

[asiaboy]

The design is OK but I would use a lot more color, especially for buttons that require user action. It is all rather drab with the many shades of brown. It is not clear to me what the USP of this site will be?

Is the second guy eating a carrot?

I find the eyes of the guys at the bottom very "uncanny valley" style.

My two cents.

[vdc-loki]

The design is OK but I would use a lot more color, especially for buttons that require user action. It is all rather drab with the many shades of brown. It is not clear to me what the USP of this site will be?

Is the second guy eating a carrot?

I find the eyes of the guys at the bottom very "uncanny valley" style.

My two cents.

After I was done laughing myself to death over the 'carrot' comment I come back to the rest of your post (although STILL chuckling over the carrot)

I don't get what you mean by "It's all rather drab with the MANY shades of BROWN"

The entire design is a pair of Blue Jeans, the logo for the site is the patch of the jeans, the buttons are the same patches. the section breaks are black belts.

so that confuses me when you say many shades of brown.

As for the USP, it's the same thing with ALL my sites, my program is the ONLY program owned and ran by the artists, the paysites are the only sites where members can interact with the artists, learn how to make (or improv) their own art, and direct their own sets via requests.

That alone in my mind is the biggest Unique Selling Points any site could have in this day and age. (Unless you're using USP as a diff acronym other then Unique Selling Point)

As for the "uncanny Vally" issues, there's nothing I can do with those models OTHER THEN not render them so close up, I agree the eyes just get to "toony" and throw the rest of the realism right out the window, but surprisingly The Uncanny Vally does not seem to effect the 3D Toon Porn market.

-Loki-

[asiaboy]

Ok, I understand it better now. IMO the blue jeans theme would have to be more prominent then? More bright? Of course my eye was drawn to the models... and their eyes. Yeah, there's not enough blue in the blue jeans. That's just my two cents. Didn't the kaiser tell Mozart there were too many notes in his new opera?