Need expert advise - my new site

[NewBoyToyMatt]

Hi all:

Since joining this fourm a few months back, and attending my first Internext back in Jan., I've learned a lot. I've put what I've leaned so far into my first "big" paysite.

Can you take a look at it and let me know what you think of the tour? I think there may be too many pages in it, but I want your expert opinions.

Thanks alot!

Matt

[Lee]

Im sure we'd love to but you need to give us a link first hehe

Regards,

Lee

[Bec]

Got a link??

[Gary-Alan]

Got a link??

Is that like Got Milk? hehehehe

[NewBoyToyMatt]

Oops.. www.friskyboys.com. Old domain name new tour and inside.

[gaystoryman]

Well I like it.. nice, quick loading and gives me lots of information.

on this tour page.. you have this text

Chat with hot guys one on one, or direct two or more hot twinks have tell them exactly what to do.

Doesn't quite flow.. direct two or more hot twinks have? need to put an 'and' in there me thinks.

Only drawback I saw is that it might need a splash of colour on some of the pages, still i like the soft tones, makes the models stand out more too.

anyhow just a quick view, but overall i liked it.

[curiousbunny]

AS PARIS WOULD SAY !

<p align="center">
<img border="2" src="http://www.curiousbunny.com/paris.gif" width="150" height="149"></p>

[Chilihost]

nice looking site, i love the colour scheme. That boy on your splash page looks familiar: http://www.eutwinks.com

cheers,
Luke

[Bec]

Very nice tour -- only real comment kind of matches one prior and that was seeing a number of places where your text is choppy.

I know it's hard to sit and look at that text for hours on end, as your mind reads it one way, but when it gets up there on the web for fresh eyes, it just doesn't flow correctly.

Get someone to proof it page by page for you if you can and fix a few minor slips and you'll be good to go.

[NewBoyToyMatt]

Thanks for the feedback so far. I agree, some of the text needs work. After spending way too many late nights writing and looking at it, a fresh pair of eyes is a great idea.

Matt

[dalimili]

I have to say I quite like it... but...

1. If you've got 20,000 photos inside, show more models
2. I'd change some of the models (3 of them) which I've seen on gazillions of sites
3. It does remind a "bit" of RandyBlue, but just a little
4. Add more info on video tour, as now it looks kinda "oh yeah, we do have *some videos"


Besides that, I think it's quite ok

[Madame0120]

Yum. I like the nice clean layout!

But since I haven't seen a ton of porn, the young men all look fresh and tasty to me.

May I please have a serving of:
http://www.friskyboys.com/images/join_2.jpg

?

I promise not to return him damaged.

[Slade]

Oops.. www.friskyboys.com. Old domain name new tour and inside.

Looks ok..like others say..after awhile, a lot of splash pages sort of blend all together. But would like the splash page to JUMP out more and grab my attention..maybe with bolder colors? In this competitive age and SHORT retention span by surfers..gotta make sure that splash page leaves them wanting to see more!

For what it is worth..hope you do have 20,000 pics in the members area. I remember way back one of the ccbill dudes giving me a hassle cuz I said something like that on the splash page and didn't have 20,000 pics inside. I had to change the wording on the splash page. I think, like all places, some times it just depends on WHICH tech ya get.

[Xstr8guy]

I like the colors on the tour. To my eyes, the muted color makes the images jump off the page. Bold color is overdone. Every other site is SCREAMING at you... it's a nice change when something is subtle.

The only advice I can lend... make the thumbs bigger, crop them closer and apply some filters to make them POP off the page.

One of these days, we are going to have to get Scorpio to show use how he gets his images so clean and clear.

[NewBoyToyMatt]

Thanks Xst8guy for the comments. I did softer colors to make the pictures "pop." What do you mean "apply some filters" to the thumbs?