Quote Originally Posted by basschick
http://www.nudemalemuscle.com/black/bmm.jpg
i like this, but something is missing... i had him try white on the title...

http://www.nudemalemuscle.com/black/bmm2.jpg
hmmmm... doesn't seem like an improvement, although it does bring the words out from the page.

All I can add really is that your main character on the right tends to blend into the background.