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Meant to be Obscene, not Heard.
I like the niche. I was going to share Bec's sentiments on the photos. They could be bigger (in the photo AND video preview sections).
The "2257 compliance statement" is technically/legally incorrect. It should read "18 U.S.C. 2257 Record-Keeping Requirements Compliance Statement".
I'd like to see more of the 3 models getting the headline space, since they're there. I'm lured in, but they're somewhat buried in the rest of the content. There are a lot of other video clips and photos, so that's a good thing. But if you have more stuff you could use as free preview content that contains them, I'd recommend it. Larger photos. Some bio of suggestive likes/dislikes that gets readers going. The site seems pretty "tied down." I can read about what I am getting, but I can't see much. Enlarging the thumbnails as Bec mentioned should help.
It wouldn't hurt to also include some screen captures and/or a short clip or trailer from the DVD. Use dirty copy to sell it. The description doesn't quite turn me on. The content might not be overt sex, but you can hit on the buzzwords a little harder to get readers going.
There are references in the video clip section to movies not up for sale. Will the store being expanded?
Overall You have all the ingredients for those that like this niche. With some tweaks in presentation I think it can do well.
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