i don't think the text is that bad - the problem is the way it's laid out on the page. some of that text was on the old tour, but with the other stuff, it somehow worked. now it seems awkward and abrupt.

Quote Originally Posted by Xstr8guy
Agreed with Patti... the cutouts are terrible. Someone needs some better Photoshop skills.
Also, the graphics load last on tour2.htm and they take a while even on DSL because of all of the Flash video on the page.
And where's the text? I don't understand why these models/site owners (such as Pierre) have no clue how to write about themselves. For god's sake make me hot about wanting to see you in action. Don't assume that pictures can do all of the talk.

Btw, I do like the colors.