I don't know too much about AVS rules. My comments are in regards to submitting to linklists such as the ones I submit to with mostly (Jay's XXX, Link-o-rama, penisbot, hoes.com etc).

1. Your text links (CLICK HERE TO SEE MORE EXCLUSIVE 18-22 YR OLD TEEN BOYS! ) may be considered blind by some reviewers. To stay on the safe side, you need to add "at Funk Boys" at the end or "Instant Access" at the beginning of the link.

2. The size of the pictures would be too small for many of those linklists. The latest rule by Link-o-rama is that the sum of height and width should be at least 1200 pixels... while other LL's didn't change their rules yet, many reviewers prefer larger images than the ones you have there.

3. You can add more links to yoru sponsors. In the LL's I mentioned, the rules say up to 3 outgoing links on each page. Why not use that? I would break the group of images and insert another text link in there.

4. I would try more colorful sales text in the links. Both in actual font color and also in how you describe the sponso'r site. Get your visitors interested. "Click Here for Horny Hot Twinks out to show you their huge throbbing cocks at Boy Funk" or something to that effect. Also, I wouldn't repeat the same text in all the links. If one sales pitch doesn't work, why not try something different?

5. Make your links to your sponsors stand out. Use larger fonts and use color to bring out the really dirty words (and use those!).

I hope this is relevant, because not sure you're working with the same kind of lists/rules as I do