Quote Originally Posted by sunfunbill View Post
Hey there DonMike, I've seen your name before, maybe on cozy frog? Thanks for the tips. I think some "gay" words should be thrown in because you write both for the surfers as well as the SE.
OMG, I haven't been to cozy frog in years. Is it still around. Now there's a blast from the past. Heh heh. But yeah, that be me. I'm the only DonMike in the industry that I know of for the past eight or so years.

I think the real trick is to sound natural, and to think about how the words sound to you if you were the person reading them. Even by replacing "Gay" with "Straight" like Develish had done will show you if it comes out awkward or not. But you sound like you're on the right track. Best of luck.