Okay without having read the rest of the replies in this thread as yet here are a couple of things i would suggest in order to make the site more sellable..

Index.php page:

This is the first page that your surfers are going to see and, for all intents and purposes, it is a wasted page, there is nothing on the page that draws my attention to the fact that this site features fresh-faced twinks at all.

Apart from the page lacking in the 'wow factor' the 'join now' link is also far to small IMHO that should be the biggest link on the page and animated as it is now instead, the largest link is for the 'members' area.

The pics themselves on this page are good quality however, they do look as if they have just been 'thrown' on the page to fill the space up. Because of this, non of them really stand out over any of the others, again, IMHO, every page on a tour should have 3 main parts to it as far as images go, a focal point - largest pic on the page, a tertiary image/s - the next largest images and, the background 'filler' images.

Index2.php page:

The page when first loaded show 'loading..' to me that is a waste of marketing time, for the most part, the first 3 seconds on any given page is the amount of time you have to make the surfer become interested in your site, whether you are selling porn members or books, if the first thing a surfer sees is some standard text, you have lost them IMHO.

That being said, this page does at least have somewhat of a structure so far as the images being used themselves, in fact my attention was immediately drawn to the guy on the left with a pierced eyebrow

My only main concern on this second page is that the text seems a little to 'formal' that is to say it is blocked out at the bottom left of the page, again, general maketing rules dictate that for the most part, sufers tend to read web pages from top to bottom, left to right, so the text itself, if you want to have it boxed should be at the top most left section of the site or, the bottom right of the tour page.

Again, the text itself doesnt reallt 'do' anything for me, i have seen the same text on thousands of sites in the past. As a surfer i want to know what makes YOUR site different from the countless others out there on the web?

Also, the 'join' link doesnt do the page justice, instead of having it animated orange/grey have it orange/ white, it WILL stand out more

Index3.php page:

The first thing that caught my eye on this page was the flash animation which is very good however, you have nothing else around that area of the page at all, put some text there, even if its something generic suchs as 'twinks fucking'.

Again, the text is boxed and formal looking, spread it out across the page, you have a 300x200 sized space at the top right of the page which for all intents and purposes is dead space, throw some text in there to get the surfer interested.

Also, the join link again doesnt stand out as much as it could / should.

Index4.php page:

Again, as with the first page, the images all appear to be thrown together in order to fill the page, as i mentioned above make sure you have 3 primary types of imagery in use, focal point, tertiary focal point and filler images, as it stands right now, you have filler images and thats it as far as im concerned.

You may also want to change the image of the guy on the left hand side of the page, he doesnt stand out at all and the size of him overall, he should

Its nice to see you have changed the positioning of the text on this page however, again it looks to 'formal' because of how it is blocked, that text should be spread across the entire page and again should be specific to something your site has that no other twink site does.. this is the page where the surfer is going to decide to click to the join page or not and, as a surfer right now, i wouldnt go to the next page.. youll have wasted a potential sale.

Join.php page:

I actually like the layout of this page in general however, the three images you have on the bottom left should be in the upper right of the page and, they should be 3 different images. By giving a surfer a chance to see 3 images from 3 different sets instead of 3 from the same set you are potentially giving them an opportunity to see a model that is going to excite them thus, hopefully making them want to join in order to see more of that model.

Again however, you have boxed text on this page and, unfortunatly it is in the wrong location, you want to make one last sales attempt with this text so move it higher up the page so the surfer sees it without having to scroll down past the join options

Hopefully this info has helped you out and hopefully if you mak even a couple of the changes suggested you'll start to see some sales rolling in

Overall however, the site is good it just lacks 'personality' which is going to make it differ from the countless other twink sites out there. Work on giving the site a life of its own on the tour pages and im positive you will be on to a winner with it :thumbsup:

Regards,

Lee