My apologies for the delay in posting this review Ian but here goes...

The first thing that hits me on the site is the simplicity of the site, thats not a bad thing BTW, i love simple sites and this delivers EXACTLY what it sounds like it will delivery, stories without any of the 'bells and whistles' you see on almost every other site, no funky banners distracting from the main purpose of the site, i like it

However, that being said, i think some of the colors on the fonts need to change, just mho but that pinkish background doesnt lend itself to well to purple or reds, you *may* want to give it a few days using a different color on either the BG or the fonts, who knows, it may even sell better than it does now

The other thing i would change on the first page is those buttons at the bottom, especially the large homophobia free one, in all honesty, thats wasted bandwidth, a surfer going to a 'gay story' site i would think, already knows its going to be homophobia free

One other thing that *I* would personally change is the book graphic, it uses the same model on each page, add a different guy on the cover on each page, you have a chance that by the surfer seeing the same model over and over again that they will leave, a small chance but a chance non the less and, you need to be keeping the surfers on your site, not giving them an opportunity to leave.

All in all i really like the simplicity of the site overall, as i mentioned above its a nice break away from the 'flashy' sites with features that really have no reason to be on the site other than to make it look good.

Oh the one thing i would do though, i couldnt find a link to GWW You may want to add one there LOL

Nice work overall though, and remind me in a week or so that i need to speak to you about some story stuff too, otherwise i will forget LOL

Regards,

Lee