I've been working on this new DVD format for the release of my sleepingmen.com DVD series and would like your input.

This is the first 12 minutes of the DVD. As I'm posting this online I've added my watermark a few times for good measure and degraded the quality to make the file size smaller. I'll be taking the link down in 48 hours.

The feel is supposed to be amateur and the video opens with the sleepingmen intro text and is followed by a 2 1/2 minute scrolling story about the scenario written by Ian (GayStoryman).

After the story there is a fade in to the footage.

Nothing is set in stone here and any input is greatly appreciated as I've been working on this a while and I'm a bit mind numb at this point.

Thanks for your input