Quote Originally Posted by XXXWriterDude View Post
There you go!

I would have made them all rugged and dirty and muddy, with unkempt hair and just a general air of raggedy-ness to them.

I'm a stickler for detail. The moment a porn scenario becomes "inauthentic" to me, I lose my boner. I can't help it. I'm an intellectually driven person. I need attention to detail.

Of course, I know that not everybody out there is like me, so when I review movies, I usually take into consideration the suspension of disbelief of the "average Joe," and write from that POV.
I actually wanted to make htem muddy with unkempt hair, etc, but my hair and make-up guy is a fashionista... he wouldn't hear of it. So the guys got to stay pretty. I think I will address that in the sequel (and yes, there is a sequel).

R.