Thanks for the input. I copy/pasted the story I bought. I had them all made as I'm not good at that kind of thing. Someone else mentioned doing a voiceover so I did that over the weekend and realized the errors you're talking about LOL

I brightened up the green enough to make it legible, and not so much that it looks Christmas like :-D .

I'm iffy on the voice over.. it seems more fake to me. I'll post it to get opinions. The text with a voice over makes it more bareable and gives the viewer something to do while listening.

Normally I wouldn't have text on a video but I realized that the DVD content seems less real as there's no story to go with each guy like on the website... so it seems like endless strangers being jerked off in their sleep with no backstory. How do you combat that other then a scrolling story they can skip and/or a voice over story?

Thanks for the input I really appreciate it.. keep it coming!

Quote Originally Posted by Jasun View Post
You need a copy editor something fierce. I'm dyslexic and I saw lots of spelling, grammatical, spacing and line-break errors. It's all kinda awkward to see.

The forest green on a black background makes it worse. It's almost illegible.

It also goes on WAY too long and it's kinda... meandering. Too many words. You can tell that story in about 1/2 as many.

Why not do a voice over and ditch the text altogether?