I think the price is too high. I have a Kindle but I will not buy a $9.99 book from an "unknown" author. And there is plenty of gay fiction on Amazon for 1.99 or 99 cents.

I read a report a while ago about someone who started selling on Amazon. After a while they priced their books at 99 cents (or was it 1.99, don't recall) and in the end they made more money at that price-point. At 99 cents it becomes an impulse buy.